Red Rose, Carnation, Calla Lily, and Hummingbird, WIP, © 2019 Michelle Kogan, watercolor and watercolor pencil.
Happy Poetry Friday!
I shared a cherita poem this week for #NaPoWriMo and a WIP Painting. As I continued working on the painting I decided to write a second cherita that would continue on from the first poem. Below are both ending with the second.
RED ROSE AND CARNATION
Red Rose rose–
Dignified, delicate, and
determined to dance…
Alas Carnation cut in,
curtailing her charismatic character.
Can’t we cohabitate cordially, Rose commented.
© 2019 Michelle Kogan
RED ROSE, CARNATION, AND CALLA LILY
Hummingbird hovered by…
Hum, hum, hum, sang hummingbird’s wings–
Beauty lies in harmony she sang
Off she flew–
Red Rose, rose to dance, Carnation curtsied,
and Calla lily contentedly sighed.
© 2019 Michelle Kogan
I’ve been having to deal with some neighbor decisions this week and looked for a poem that might address or shift my thoughts from the dilemma that is at hand. (A neighbor’s beloved tree that she wants to have sprayed to save, and my concerns over the spraying of pesticides.) Here’s what I found to temporarily distract me.
BOTTLED WATER
by Kim Dower
Also, currently the Poetry Foundation has a rich collection on Poetry and the Environment
Carol Varsalona at her blog Beyond Literacy Link is hosting this weeks Poetry Friday Roundup. I’m looking forward to checking out what she’s offering, hope you’ll stop by too! Thanks for hosting Carol!
For National Poetry Month, I’m writing poems inspired by art that I create or have created. Visit these spots on line to participate in National Poetry Month: Academy of American Poets, Jama’s Rattigan’s Blog for the Kidlitoshphere Events Roundup:Jama’s Alphabet Soup and #NaPoWriMo
I wrote a similar poem about violets this week, Michelle. Love this ‘dance’ of the flowers you’ve created. As for the water dilemma, and your neighbor one, too, may you continue to be ‘smart and hydrated’! Ha! It feels to me that many should bring their own water bottles & stop with the plastic!
Michelle, your artwork is so lovely. Thank you for sharing the beauty of springtime. Your poems have not only a lilting quality to them but a message that the world needs to hear: living harmoniously with each other. There is always room to share space. There are many ways to be kind. As for your dilemma, I am glad that you were temporarily distracted.
Especially lovely watercolor this week, Michelle. Love the charming poems that go with your art; nice use of alliteration. 🙂 Hope your dilemma is solved soon; the bottled water poem was certainly different and interesting . . .
I love the watercolour and the poems. The personification appeals to me. I went to read the rest of the bottled water poem and left feeling unsettled, but I think that was the point, yes?
Your alliteration dances along with the flowers and hummingbird, Michelle! I love how your watercolors capture their dance, as well!
I love how you treat the flowers as characters in these lines:
Red Rose, rose to dance, Carnation curtsied,
and Calla lily contentedly sighed.
Love, love your watercolor pencil! As I drank it its beauty, I saw a peaceful array of diversity. Then I read your cherita (which is wonderful) and realized that in the beautiful peaceful array of diversity there also is conflict. How like life is that?! I pondered it… just as in the beauty and peace there lies conflict, in conflict— if I look —perhaps I can find beauty and peace. And “Bottled Water” is spot on — love the juxtaposition in the opening lines, love the wit and humor. Just yesterday afternoon, I stood at a beverage cooler in the airport and read all those labels and found myself consciously thinking about which one to buy.
Distractions can be lifesavers for sure. Your cheritas are charming! Your art and poems always lift my spirits.
I love the story that the two poems tell…and how they are a commentary on your “neighbor issues.” Hoping for a good compromise and re-usable bottles of water all around!
Such a sweet picture, Michelle. I am so fascinated by the hummingbird so tiny, delicate and delightful! Clever use of alliteration in your poems – ‘carnation cut in’ was a particular delight.
I love how your art and words dance together. Good luck with the neighbor issue–may you find a way to dance together as do the flowers in your poem. Thank you for sharing the water poem. It is a delight that also leaves me much to ponder.
Thanks for another lovely post! Ruth, thereisnosuchthingasagodforsakentown.blogspot.com