Happy Poetry Friday!
I tried out a stanza of a diminishing verse poem from the Poetry Sister’s September challenge. Many thanks to you all, Tanita, Laura, Mary Lee, Liz, Sara, Tricia, Kelly, and Andi, be sure to stop by their blogs and read their poem responses! Find more of these poems tagged with #PoetryPals.
In this form the last word in each line is derived from the last word in the first line minus the first letter in that word, and this continues through each successive lines.
In my poem below my last word in line one is: glow, in line two it turns into low, and in line three into ow.
In fall leaves wear a brilliant glow
trees disrobe and dim leaves low
branches all bare, baby trees whisper–ow!
© 2023 Michelle Kogan, draft
I have art in the forthcoming exhibit:
DON’T “DRAG” ME DOWN: TODAY’S BATTLE FOR LIBERATION
October 5 – November 3, 2023
Public Reception: Thursday, October 5, 5 – 8 p.m.
Koehnline Museum of Art, Des Plaines campus
1600 E Golf Road, Des Plaines, IL
Above is the invite for the exhibit and below is my pastel drawing included in it.
for more info visit their website.
I’m also happy to be included in this lovely enviro-focused, butterfly–monarch poetry anthology, that just came out this week. I have a gathering of poems included. Another Poetry Friday poet, Marcie Flinchum Atkins is also in the anthology.
Fly an Anthology of Poetry
Published by Hey Hey Books 2023
Edited by Alyssa Myers
Available in print and as an ebook:
Bookshop.org Thriftbooks.com https://www.barnesandnoble.com/ and https://www.kobo.com/
Here’s one of my poems:
PAPILIO POLYXENES–HYBRID
PERCEPTION
“The genus name ‘Papilio’ is the Latin word for butterfly.”
You’re Beautiful
Polyxenes comes “from Polyxena, the daughter of Priamos,
King of Troy (Homer’s Iliad).”
Some say you are a pest–eating farmers’ and gardeners’ fields… Your pest part belongs to your lineage before your metamorphosis. When you were a caterpillar, you nibbled away on carrot tops and its family of dill, parsley, fennel, and Queen Anne’s lace.
But you, dear swallowtail, are no pest,
you are magnificent…
And you bring pollination treasures,
beauty, and moments of reflection.
You offer a gift of flutter and escape,
Alighting lightly on my milkweed and zinnias…
And I will always wonder of your wounded antenna–
How it came to be in your short, short life–approximately 12 days
I discovered you in perfect form except for your antenna.
I’m curious to know why you were named after Polyxena,
the Greek princess who bravely accepted her sacrifice
at age 18 for the lost life of Achilles.
Perhaps your shared beauty connects
you through time…
Carry us away, beautiful black swallowtail butterfly…
© Michelle Kogan
The talented, gracious, and creative blog connoisseur Jama at her blog Jama’s Alphabet Soup is hosting this weeks Poetry Friday Roundup, thanks Jama. She’s serving up some wonderful whoopee pie, tea, and smiling-induced poetry, be sure to stop by!
Michelle, congratulations on your inclusion in the art show and “Fly!” Your work is both gorgeous and thought provoking. Kudos!
Congratulations, Michelle, for the art show and your poems in the anthology! I love the diminishing poem, too. As Tanita wrote about them, they are short. Yours final line about the baby trees, a new way to imagine them, wonderful!
Oh baby tree…and that gift of flutter and escape. Yes! Congratulations on all the ways your creativity is finding new audiences! xo
Such a beautiful tribute to the Swallowtail. I love how you wove in Pokyxena and her sacrifice , leaving us wondering if she shared a similar pesky side.
Congratulations on the poem publication! I tried diminished verse as well. It was a fun exercise. I only had one draft that I liked. I find the form too stifling, if you ask me.
Michelle, congratulation on your recent successes. I played along with the diminishing poem and thought it was challenging. Yours is quiet creative with the ow ending.
What a lot of treats in this rich post, Michelle. Congrats on being included in the anthology (great butterfly poem!), and thanks for sharing your art and fun diminished verse.
So much exciting news! I love the “gift of flutter and escape. ” Congratulations!!
Congratulations on your Art in the exhibit and your poetry in the anthology. I enjoyed your poetic conversation with the swallowtail butterfly.
Thanks for joining in with the diminishing verse challenge! Like the baby trees, I’m whispering “OH!” at all the beauty and bounty nature offers at this time of year. Congratulations on your art, poetry and activism! You are bounty embodied!
Congratulations on being included in the art show and in the anthology! Lots to celebrate! You did a great job with the diminishing verse. Now every time I see baby trees, I’ll listen for their “ow”. Wonderful work!
Your sumac (?) photo is beautiful. I can see why it was poetically inspiring. Congrats on all the wonderful creativity, Michelle! 🙌
Congratulations on so much creative engagement and recognition, Michelle – you’re a force! Thanks for “carrying us away” this week.
Congrats on all the latest triumphs, Michelle! And I so enjoyed your Diminishing Verse, too!